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The new page is here, enjoy! 
Sorry for the long wait... I have to prepare my portfolio for school and that requires as many drawings as half of my current gallery... that's pretty much and even though many have been made during this year, not every piece of my school work is in a suitable condition to show in front of a jury. I might throw in my comics, provided they fit in because there are different categories. All in all I am overwhelmed so pages take longer to make because I mainly make these at night but it is still fun. 
I made the mistake of using sketch paper for this one, uuugghh... Sketch paper is very good... for sketching
When I started to color I saw it would look grainy but I did not resketch the page, and the result is an artwork of pointillism... I wonder if that art style is still trendy? So it's extremely grainy, sorrysorry, please do not comment it 
I felt the need to reuse that sketch paper because I am obsessed with reusing stuff but for further pages I will stick to layout paper or printer paper.
Feel free to critique anyway, I would like to hear what you think! Please comment on the story, not just on the anatomy! Pages are made in a rush and there could be mistakes, I am well aware of these.
Cover: fav.me/damanon
First page: Water Wolves_Prologue page 1
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Sorry for the long wait... I have to prepare my portfolio for school and that requires as many drawings as half of my current gallery... that's pretty much and even though many have been made during this year, not every piece of my school work is in a suitable condition to show in front of a jury. I might throw in my comics, provided they fit in because there are different categories. All in all I am overwhelmed so pages take longer to make because I mainly make these at night but it is still fun. I made the mistake of using sketch paper for this one, uuugghh... Sketch paper is very good... for sketching
When I started to color I saw it would look grainy but I did not resketch the page, and the result is an artwork of pointillism... I wonder if that art style is still trendy? So it's extremely grainy, sorrysorry, please do not comment it I felt the need to reuse that sketch paper because I am obsessed with reusing stuff but for further pages I will stick to layout paper or printer paper.Feel free to critique anyway, I would like to hear what you think! Please comment on the story, not just on the anatomy! Pages are made in a rush and there could be mistakes, I am well aware of these.
Cover: fav.me/damanon
First page: Water Wolves_Prologue page 1
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHello there! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>Good Points:
- OoO I like the grainy texture on this comic. Hey, interesting effects happens when you make a "mistake" Like drawing on sketch paper! It also helps make the coloring more solid! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>- Gosh, the linework! * u * You also included crosshatching there! It's a very interesting form of shading. (Also unique. At least, in my opinion.)
Improvements/Suggestions/Questions:
- In the last panel, Grigio's position makes it look like the background is just a screen which makes the last panel seem unrealistic.
- The text doesn't align well with the bubble. First of all, the text should be in the middle of the bubble. Second, you should be putting a hyphen between each syllable if the word is too long for that row. Instead of "decla-re", try "de-clare" Here's an example of ideal text arrangement: www.google.com/search?q=comic+…:
Hope this helps! ^_^