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The new page is here, I cannot believe the prologue is finished! 
Soon you get to know the main story! 
I hope you like this page, feel free to leave a critique, your feedback is much appreciated! ^^
Please leave feedback on the story, not just the anatomy! I'm not confident in my writing skills...
Cover: fav.me/damanon
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Water Wolves updates on Fridays!
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Soon you get to know the main story! I hope you like this page, feel free to leave a critique, your feedback is much appreciated! ^^Please leave feedback on the story, not just the anatomy! I'm not confident in my writing skills...
Cover: fav.me/damanon
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactHello there!
Good Points:
- I do like the variety of width in the linework as this make this look interesting! For ex: You did softer and quick lines for fur and bolder lines for the toes and the soaked fur! It looks great that way! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>- I can see that you're experimenting with the paneling with the sixth and seventh panels. I think you should continue doing what you had done! It makes it looks more organic and abstract in a way.
Improvements/Suggestions:
- I think that you should have shown Grigio and Akai burying Ria and having a funeral. It would make sense since the wolves are shown with human characteristics and they obviously would be mourning someone's loss.
- There are some minor errors in the text not being in the center of the bubbles and the panels aren't centered on the page.
Hope this helps! ^_^