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The new page is here, sorry for the wait! I will try to keep the update every week, but i cannot guarantee it, because I have multiple projects to proceed with at school...
Cover:Water wolves (cover)
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Water Wolves is on Tapastic: tapastic.com/series/WaterWolve…
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Feel free to leave a comment, constructive critiques are appreciated! Let me know how I can make this comic better
Art, story and characters (c)
Water Wolves is on Tapastic: tapastic.com/series/WaterWolve…
Join the group
if you want to follow the comic without following me! In the group only the pages and references/concepts will be uploaded.Water Wolves updates on Fridays!
Check out the comic on Tapastic: tapastic.com/series/WaterWolve…
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactThat poor Mama wolf definitely doesn't trust people even friends! ;-; ;-; ;-; Please don't die on me, Mama Wolf. Plz.... ;-; ;-; ;-; ;-;
Here is a list of things you can improve on:
- Why are the wolves looks purple? Is it a scanning problem? They kind of look like aliens.
- On the third panel, Mama Wolf's back end of the body look kind of weird. Maybe try to have it a bit rounder next time.
- The background looks empty with only the sand and the sky. Maybe you can add some rocks, mountains, etc.
- Minor Suggestion: Maybe have the periods on the first speech bubble of the comic be next to "friend". That way the speech would come off more natural and less cut off.
Hope this helps! ^_^