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Water Wolves_Chapter1 p17

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Forgot to add some info last time, it might be good to know for future readers who get lost, these are new characters on a new island :)

The first page of chapter one is here, enjoy! :D there will be new characters but the quality of the scan in this one is bad, my scanner overly lightened some parts >_< Also the markings could not be drawn well in traditional but I will try to get it look like more similar to the digital ref...

Cover: fav.me/damanon

First page: Water Wolves_Prologue page 1

Chapter cover:  Water Wolves Chapter 1 Cover by LuckyStarhun
 
Next: Water Wolves_Chapter1 p18 by LuckyStarhun

Character refs:  Moss Reference by LuckyStarhun  Dani Ref by LuckyStarhun

Moss was designed by :iconiceriftfyera:

Dani was designed by :iconzu-nasr: (I made some adjustments to this one, he was simplified a bit)

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The comic is on Tapastic: tapastic.com/series/WaterWolve…

Art, story and characters (c) :iconluckystarhun:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

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Good Points:

- Well, this is a nice change of scenery. In the prologue, it dominated by blue or sometimes purple hues. But here, it full of murky yellow-green colors.

- Ooh! I just noticed that one of the wolves that are featured on this page resembles a raccoon with that "mask" around his eyes.

Improvements/Suggestions:

- I wonder why you decided to have to water look murky. The viewers might mistake this as these wolves are in dangerous and poisonous waters and they should get out of here.

- Some minor things that you could improve on: First, I suggest "p" and "17" I know it's something totally minor. But subtle changes can bring the quality of a comic up. Second, the splash sound text in the third panel should be ocean blue to fit the sound.

Hope this helps! ^_^