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Rivalry (concept art)

Published: Jun 30, 2016

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Just some concept for my comic project. I am not happy with the shading, I tried a new style that takes less time but I think it's not so nice that my original shading style... at least it did not turn out as good as I expected. Also I don't know why I shaded my caucasian character with purple

It was a strange idea. I did some minor changes in his design. On the left side the character is Ordas whose name means 'dun (color) or 'wolf' (informal). It is subject to change though but for the moment it seems fair ^^Feel free to comment, critiques are more than welcome

Art and characters (c) me. I adopted Ordas (left) from Ginga-Adoptz

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2490x2575px 4.41 MB

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preknuckles

Jul 2, 2016

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Not much I could say about it, it very well made, and you can tell the emotion in the dogs face very well with out it needing on human attributes. My only suggestion is to darken a few lines of fur to identify it more. consider making more of the ground. right now they look as if they are running on space with grass behind them. So creating a shadow would also help it. Again there not much to say here, you did very well. I like how you pitch in some green in the smaller brown dog and purple in the bigger grey dog.